Inspiration

As I like the song "Sixteen Moons", yesterday I wrote another verse.

What do you think about it ?

In french :

Seize Lunes, seize années

Être Ténèbres ou Lumière

Entrer dans une nouvelle aire

Le destin est tracé

In english :

Sixteen Moons, sixteen years

Become Light or Dark

Entering in a new period

Fate is plotted

I know it does not rhyme in English, but it makes pretty good in French.