i was think about my life and the people in it as i usually do a couple of times a day at night when im lead in bed before i go to sleep i cant help but just think and also when im in the shower i think alot but i just catch myself thinking about things and basically i dont like my life but what teenage girl does ? Anyway im still madly in love with my ex boyfriend blahhhh blahhh blahhh i can here you thinking it already :L But i am and he says he still likes me but wont go out with me :/ soo what can a girl do? iv been trying to talk to him and everything but i dont know anyway we was in english class and we was doing poems and i found a poem that really felt to me as it was describing me anyway i thought id write it down for you to read and well have a read and see what you think.

 

i see you at school

you glance my way

passing in the halls

on a ordinary day

 

but anytime your eyes meet mine

is a day so rare, a day so fine

 

just another fact,im nothing to you

you just looked, but didnt see

you havent got a clue

 

that my hear is racing 

im trembling inside

so much love for you

that im trying to hide

 

you smile at others

you pass me by

im invisible

i want to cry

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Comment by Brandi Jeffers on March 3, 2011 at 7:39pm

This is really good.

Comment by Elizabeth Kay on March 12, 2011 at 2:19pm

I like this,
I think it describes everyone in a special point in life.
It doesn't matter who you are,

or if you try to pertend you don't care,

it is still part of you. . .

Comment by Amy Spark on March 12, 2011 at 3:01pm
to true
Comment by Elizabeth Kay on March 12, 2011 at 4:30pm
Yes, I believe so.
I mean I've felt this way before,
Alot of times actually. . .
Comment by Amy Spark on March 12, 2011 at 6:51pm
with me theres just this one lad and i cant seem to get over him but my mate asked him and he said hes over me so :/ There goes my heart breaking again :/
Comment by Elizabeth Kay on March 24, 2011 at 8:29pm

i know what you mean. . .
There's this one guy. . .
i really like him. . .

I haven't told him yet.

but Ive been dropping hints you know?
i dont think he understands. . .

Comment by Amy Spark on March 25, 2011 at 3:42am
They never do! I use to go out with this lad i like twice but i dunno i finished it the first time and i relised it was a mistake and i told him and we went back out and we had an argument and he said he cant be bothered with a girlfriend and ended it but when i said that i love him i meant it and with me strong feelings like that dont just go away :/
Comment by Elizabeth Kay on March 25, 2011 at 5:13pm
I know what you mean.
I went out with my best friend. . .
I loved him.
I still do,
but he broke up with me the two chances I gave him.
The second one I told him he'd regret it.
I asked him if he knew it was his last chance,
he said yes that he knew.
Now. . .
He's asking for another chance. .
And it hurts,
cause I knew this was gonna happen. ..
But he didn't see it.
Now my heart is broken because I'm staying with my no. . .
Comment by Amy Spark on March 25, 2011 at 6:38pm

Mmmmmm :/ 

but the thing is with me is that i love him but he doesnt love me!

It breaks my heart everytime i see him:/

Because i know he will never be mine

And that kills me 

because i start to get over him

and then i fall back for him again

every single time i see him!!!!

Comment by Elizabeth Kay on March 25, 2011 at 7:21pm

I know how that is. . .
His name was Jace. . .
It was earlier this year. . .
We had became great friends.
I didn't know he liked me. . .
But I liked him. . .
We went out for almost a month. . .

Then he said he wasnt good enough. . .
I continued to tell him he was,
But he ended the relationship anyway. . .

And I still see him on a day to day basis. . .
And each time.
I can feel my heart rate slow, then speed up. . .
waiting for him to notice. . .

He never does. . .

he has a new girl. . .

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