Tear drops

Tear drops are everywhere
Wherever I go
Tear drops are on my skin
It's like they don't want to leave me alone
Tear drops are In front of me
To remind me why I'm crying
Tear drop are looking back at me in the mirror
To show me, how easy it was for you to let go...
Of me.

A poem by Sarah Williams

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Permalink Reply by MauriceTony Wilkins on August 9, 2012 at 4:46pm

Sounds like your sad

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Permalink Reply by Blue Flamingo on August 9, 2012 at 8:58pm

It's cool? But do you like it?
It's easier for me to write something sad down, than something happier..unless it starts it sad, and ends happy....I hope I didn't confuse you!

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Permalink Reply by MauriceTony Wilkins on August 10, 2012 at 4:59pm

YEA ITS REALLY GOOD

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Permalink Reply by Blue Flamingo on October 10, 2012 at 10:27am

Thank you, I think it's one of my best

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Permalink Reply by sadie scott on October 10, 2012 at 4:34pm

i like it wait i thought it was written by some girl sarah williams wait.............thts you isnt it blue flamingo probably isnt your name lol. :) but i think it is really good but you did confuse me are you sad orrrrr like happy? haha :)

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Permalink Reply by Ashunti on October 14, 2012 at 5:43pm

It sounds awesome! Just as good as Lena Duchannes! I write too but it's hard to let people see.....so it's never here. Anyway, my poems may seem cheesy but it doesn't matter because only you have to understand what you feel. I'm pretty sure you understand. Anyway, great poem!!!